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''Why do you want to study at this college?''
Miguel noticed that a lot of colleges ask this same question in one way or the other. But, he's unsure what exactly to write in his essay as a response.
If you have to write this essay for your college application, you can craft a strong "why us" response with some thought and planning.
Step 1: Research and Connect Interests
Research what actually interests you about attending a particular college, and connect those interests based on the college's offerings. Interests might include specific academic courses and labs run by a professor whose work you like, and joining social and sports clubs such as chess and varsity football.
You can gather these interests in a few ways:
Contact a current student, a professor who teaches your favorite course, or an admissions official via email, requesting an informational interview.
Register for a campus visit either in-person or online.
Find deep, meaningful connections so you can express how the college and you are a great match.
Did you know?
Many colleges offer information sessions that provide an opportunity for you to address any questions or concerns you may have. If you think attending one of these sessions would be beneficial, you can search for and register for one on the college's website.
Scenario: Miguel's Dilemma
Miguel understands the purpose of a ''why us'' essay. After browsing through a potential college's website, he drafted the following sentences and is trying to decide which one(s) to add to his essay:
A) I aspire to reap the fruits of the college’s superb reputation and great academic standing worldwide.
B) The college is located in a great neighborhood and I eagerly anticipate seeing the campus’s beauty as the seasons change.
C) As someone deeply involved in culture clubs during high school, I am curious to learn the context of the culture in physics in the course PHY 264 DisCERNing Leonardo: Art, Science and the Renaissance Man.
D) Being an admirer and learner of particle physics, I really look forward to the experiential learning promoted (which I've never experienced in high school) in the course PHY 310 Modern Physics-I.
Quiz
Which sentence(s) should Miguel include in his essay?
Options C and D are correct because Miguel took something very specific and connected it to himself, personalizing his response. Note that in option D, he talks about something he's fond of, but hasn't explored much. It's okay to mention things like that. Miguel should refrain from using sentences such as those for options A and B because they just mention plain, known facts about the college.
Step 2: Review and Revise
Once you've written your essay, correct any grammar or writing mistakes by using an online typing assistant, such as Grammarly or Wordtune.
Then, you can ask a teacher, friend, or family member for constructive and honest feedback and comments on your essay.
Next, revise your essay based given feedback. If your reviewer said certain sections of your essay are repetitive, for example, then you need to cut out any unnecessary words, sentences, or paragraphs to make your essay more concise. You can also ask your reviewer to help you understand how exactly you can improve.
Did you know?
If you prefer for your essay to be anonymously reviewed for free, you can submit it for a 1-to-1 peer review via CollegeVine.
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Showing how the college and you are a great fit for each other!
This Byte has been authored by
Bhart Lal
Rumie Learning Design Team